Darryl Occhipinti
Thursday, August 18, 2011
What do you think of this poem?
Very cool! I like how you used figurative language ("he stemmed from lies.") that fit with the fruit, sort of like a subtle pun. written very well. Also,the title seems to work nicely as an attention getter.
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